- Published:July 18th, 2008
- Comments:6 Comments
- Category:Comics, Fan Fiction
“Thank you Superman,” Brainy said looking up at his blue eyed hero.
Superman smiled down at Brainy, glad that he was able to save him in time, and that he could hold Brainy in his arms. He loved the feeling of being near him and holding him. Clark remembered when he saved a woman in the 21st century they would give him a kiss. He wished that Brainy would do that too.
Glaring down at the two, Superman X wished that Superman would stop holding Brainy so close.
“What are you going to do with the snake,” Lighting Lad asked, interrupting Superman X angry thoughts.
“So, tell us your name and your superpowers.” said Cosmic Boy.
“My name is Mariah LeClaire,” she said, bowing politely, “and…uh…well…I don’t really know what my superpowers are.”
“You, don’t know what your powers are?” asked Lightning Lad, raising an eyebrow. Mariah shook her head in the negative.
“Well sorry, but if you don’t have any powers I’m afraid we ca-…”
Lightning Lad was interrupted by a very enthusiastic looking Chameleon Boy who, at that very moment, leapt towards Mariah, transforming into a huge beastly looking dog. Mariah gasped and, having no time to dodge, raised her hands up to offer some protection from the attack. After realizing a few seconds later that there was no impact, Mariah looked up.
“Whoa!” was the only sound she could utter. Without knowing it she had put up a force field. It glowed green with energy. Chameleon Boy growled and struck the force field a few times, with no luck. He pulled back as Mariah’s force field had faltered and disappeared. He took this opportunity to transform into a colossal snake. Hissing, he lunged after Mariah once more, ready to sink his fangs into her body. She shot her forward in desperation. Suddenly black sparks flew out of her hand encircling Chameleon Boy and forcing him to switch back to his original form. Everybody in the tribunal stood up, marveling Mariah’s apparently newfound powers.
“B-but Brainy, we need you. I mean, where will you go? And whom can you turn to when you need help? W-will we ever see you again,” she whimpered. Brainy sighed, putting his other bag down, and held her in his arms. He was hurting her again. She had become his best friend and had stuck with him through thick and thin, even when she had lost her memory, she was there. She flung her arms around him and cried into his chest.
“I’m sorry, Vi. I-I’m sorry. It’s just the way things are,” he whispered, his hand stroking her black hair. She leaned upward to kiss his cheek. As her lips came in contact with his warm cheek, he remembered when that first mission that they were on together. He didn’t really like her at first. She was ignorant and so naïve. And he thought that her powers were useless. But yet, she proved him wrong after saving him from the destructo-bot that was holding him down with its hand. She then earns more respect from him after she had assisted him with Lightning lad’s surgery. And she did so much more for him.
She accompanied him to the spaceport and gave him one last hug before watching him aboard the star ship.
“I’ll miss you, Brainy,” she quietly said as she saw him wave goodbye to her from his window.
“Well…all right. I’ll give it a try. Just because you’re my sister, and I love you.” Nura breathed deep, composed herself, and concentrated.
After a moment, her eyes flew open in shock. “Mysa, I saw…you and Dirk, making love!”
If it were possible, Mysa grew even paler than usual. “But…that isn’t…I’ve never…”
“What?” Nura stared at her sister, astonished. “Never?!”
“Some of us spent our lifetimes in study, Nura, not chasing the pleasure of flesh!” Mysa snapped, her shrill tone revealing her consternation.
6 Comments
Oh God, just make it stop!
“Mariah LeClaire”? Mary Sue-meter tingling…
The fan-ficion is simultaneously the greatest and the most horrifying thing on GOTI.
It’s physically painful for me to read, and yet– I can’t NOT read it. Damn my eyes!!
Gee, I didn’t know there were people out there who hated my story. I simply wanted to give more power to the girls seeing as how in the LoSH cartoon they are so weakly portrayed. If you want to tell me what you hate about it you can comment on fanfiction. Me personally, I’m against the SLASH pairings I mean even Superman himself would kill anyone who wrote this kind of stuff about him and Brainy. Also , who the hell is “Mary Sue” and what the hell does she have to do with Mariah?
The fact that you typed that sentence shows how little you understand the characters you claim to love.
#4, I am the writer of the LoSH Doujinshi. I’m TheVishual on FF and AnimeFreak2301 on dA. You posted as me once before and you need to stop. I LOVE slash pairings for your information. To everyone else, if you don’t like my story then don’t read it. I need to know what I should improve on and not that you don’t like it. And if you’re going to criticize, do it in a mature and respectful manner.